December 13, 2009 8:32 AM
Mark Steyn: Obama's speech strategy
Do you read Mark Steyn? He has a brilliant way with words - and great insights. This from today's Once More from the Top, Barack!
The Obama speechwriting team don't seem to realize that. They seem to be the last guys on the planet in love with the sound of his voice and their one interminable tinny tune with its catchpenny hooks. The usual trick is to position their man as the uniquely insightful leader pitching his tent between two extremes no sane person has ever believed: "There are those who say there is no evil in the world. There are others who argue that pink fluffy bunnies are the spawn of Satan and conspiring to overthrow civilization. Let me be clear: I believe people of goodwill on all sides can find common ground between the absurdly implausible caricatures I attribute to them on a daily basis. We must begin by finding the courage to acknowledge the hard truth that I am living testimony to the power of nuance to triumph over hard truth and come to the end of the sentence on a note of sonorous, polysyllabic, if somewhat hollow, uplift. Pause for applause."It didn't come but once at Oslo last week, where Obama got a bad press for blowing off the King of Norway's luncheon. In Obama's honor. Can you believe this line made it into the speech?
"I do not bring with me today a definitive solution to the problems of war."
Well, there's a surprise. When you consider all the White House eyeballs that approve a presidential speech, it's truly remarkable that there's no one to scribble on the first draft: "Scrub this, Fred. It makes POTUS sound like a self-aggrandizing buffoon." It's not even merely the content, but the stylistic tics: "I do not bring with me" -- as if I, God of Evan Thomas's Newsweek, am briefly descending to this obscure Scandinavian backwater bearing wisdom from beyond the stars.
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Comments
Mark Steyn is one of my favorites. He has a zing to his writing that just keeps me reading and chuckling. And this article is SO true!
Posted by: Jennifer | December 13, 2009 9:20 AM
Mark Steyn is one of my favorites. He has an zing to his writing that just keeps me reading and chuckling. And this article is SO true!
Posted by: Jennifer | December 13, 2009 10:31 AM
